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Idk where to put these guys so imma place them here for now.
Name: Logan
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Looks: Black emo stlyed hair, beautiful blue green eyes. Likes wearing black and white striped shirts with black skinny jeans, and all black Chuck Taylor Converse. Tan skin
Personality: Very artistic and loves to draw.
History: He was abused by his parents and has scars all over his body. This has rendered him unable to talk. He uses a notepad or a digital device to write/talk to people on.
Mother: Unknown
Father: Unknown
Siblings: Lex
Other: not for now
Name: Lex
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Looks: Black emo styled hair usually covered by a slouch beanie except for bangs. Wears band t-shirts with black jeans with DC's or Osiris'.
Personality: Very artistic as well. Can play Drums and guitar but likes Bass better.
History: Watched his older twin get the shit beat out of him once every weekend. He waited for his parents to leave then would help him get to the neighbors so they could take care of andy cuts.
Mother: Unknown
Father: Unknown
Siblings: Logan
Other: Is very over protective of his brother, and has been since they were put in foster care at age 10
Name: Angel
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Looks: Blonde beiber/emo styled hair. Gray eyes, and white skin. Wears a blue hollister hoodie and jeans. Wears white or black airwalks.
Personality: Very nice and talkative once he gets to know you.
History:He was abused as a child and ran away. He found a nice couple and moved in with them.
Mother: Liela McLeod
Father: Vincent Smith
Siblings: A younger brother who died of AIDS.
Other: Nope
Name: Logan
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Looks: Black emo stlyed hair, beautiful blue green eyes. Likes wearing black and white striped shirts with black skinny jeans, and all black Chuck Taylor Converse. Tan skin
Personality: Very artistic and loves to draw.
History: He was abused by his parents and has scars all over his body. This has rendered him unable to talk. He uses a notepad or a digital device to write/talk to people on.
Mother: Unknown
Father: Unknown
Siblings: Lex
Other: not for now
Name: Lex
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Looks: Black emo styled hair usually covered by a slouch beanie except for bangs. Wears band t-shirts with black jeans with DC's or Osiris'.
Personality: Very artistic as well. Can play Drums and guitar but likes Bass better.
History: Watched his older twin get the shit beat out of him once every weekend. He waited for his parents to leave then would help him get to the neighbors so they could take care of andy cuts.
Mother: Unknown
Father: Unknown
Siblings: Logan
Other: Is very over protective of his brother, and has been since they were put in foster care at age 10
Name: Angel
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Looks: Blonde beiber/emo styled hair. Gray eyes, and white skin. Wears a blue hollister hoodie and jeans. Wears white or black airwalks.
Personality: Very nice and talkative once he gets to know you.
History:He was abused as a child and ran away. He found a nice couple and moved in with them.
Mother: Liela McLeod
Father: Vincent Smith
Siblings: A younger brother who died of AIDS.
Other: Nope
Last edited by Heatherfeather on Tue Nov 20, 2012 8:58 pm; edited 1 time in total
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I might have somewhere for you to put them
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Wait a second, while I finish it.
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Logan Adam Portz
I awake to a loud crashing sound downstairs. Hearing my older twin come out of his room, I got out from under my sheets. Lex opened the door to my room and motioned for me to hide. I nodded and headed for the back window. My brother was giving signals.
He ran to the window, having seen me having trouble. We soon found that it was stapled shut. Our father was soon at the top of the staircase, drunken and filled with the same unknown rage that he had every night.
“LOGAN!!!!!!!!” my brother cried. He was shoved aside. His head met the wall with a sickening thud, but he got back up. A rough hand soon had me by my long Emo styled hair.
I was soon shoved into a corner and nude. Cuts, scars, and bruises were still visible. I braced myself as a fist swung at me. It hit me square in the temple. I prayed for God to come and take me with him. To the land of dreams. Every time pain pulsed through my body, I prayed.
The weapons started coming out, and by then I was a mess on the floor. I was just glad to have taken out my snakebites and tongue piercing. I felt the sting of a whip across my back. He began to chuckle, that means blood was coming from me. Whoosh, SNAP! Repeatedly that’s all I heard for what seemed like hours on end.
I again woke only this time there was an angel. She was humming a soft tune. I could feel her hand stroking my hair. She was beauty. Her mascara and eyeliner covered eyes. Long Emo styled hair with side swept bangs that had the tips dyed red.
I started to hum with her. She smiled as I began to feel the concrete on my skin, and her hand slowly faded away. She sang the last part of Heaven’s Calling by Black Veil Brides. Tears soon filled my eyes as I realized that God had sent me a message saying it wasn’t my time yet.
“LOGAN!!!!” was all I heard. Lex’s face focused and I saw his eyeliner was smeared to the point of no fixing it. “I called the cops finally. They arrested Ty.” I felt my mid-section lifted and held by Lex. “I won’t ever let anything happen to you again.” He said, like he would a lover.
I opened my mouth to reply. Air, that was all that you could hear. I began to cry more as I realized I couldn’t talk or sing anymore. This seemed to harm Lex as well. We both sat there crying. We didn’t care if I was still nude. It was just two 16 year old boys, crying for two purposes. One we were free from him and that’s what mattered, and two, we were now homeless and speechless.
My brother helped me to my room. My face still hurt from all the pain. My temple throbbed. I looked up at my brother and saw him holding out a pair of black and gray checkered boxers. I took them and stepped into them. Soon a black and white, horizontal striped shirt was on and a pair of black skinny jeans and converse.
There were police everywhere by eight that morning. Lex was explaining to them. I sat in my room against the wall in between the wings and halo I drew. My eyeliner was redone and smudged from all the moisture.
I felt a hand on my cheek. I looked up to see my guardian angel again. She fixed my hair, and smiled. She faded away.
Stuffing my clothes in a garbage bag, I grabbed my sketch book, drawing pencils, and coloring pencils and left. I never once looked back.
I awake to a loud crashing sound downstairs. Hearing my older twin come out of his room, I got out from under my sheets. Lex opened the door to my room and motioned for me to hide. I nodded and headed for the back window. My brother was giving signals.
He ran to the window, having seen me having trouble. We soon found that it was stapled shut. Our father was soon at the top of the staircase, drunken and filled with the same unknown rage that he had every night.
“LOGAN!!!!!!!!” my brother cried. He was shoved aside. His head met the wall with a sickening thud, but he got back up. A rough hand soon had me by my long Emo styled hair.
I was soon shoved into a corner and nude. Cuts, scars, and bruises were still visible. I braced myself as a fist swung at me. It hit me square in the temple. I prayed for God to come and take me with him. To the land of dreams. Every time pain pulsed through my body, I prayed.
The weapons started coming out, and by then I was a mess on the floor. I was just glad to have taken out my snakebites and tongue piercing. I felt the sting of a whip across my back. He began to chuckle, that means blood was coming from me. Whoosh, SNAP! Repeatedly that’s all I heard for what seemed like hours on end.
I again woke only this time there was an angel. She was humming a soft tune. I could feel her hand stroking my hair. She was beauty. Her mascara and eyeliner covered eyes. Long Emo styled hair with side swept bangs that had the tips dyed red.
I started to hum with her. She smiled as I began to feel the concrete on my skin, and her hand slowly faded away. She sang the last part of Heaven’s Calling by Black Veil Brides. Tears soon filled my eyes as I realized that God had sent me a message saying it wasn’t my time yet.
“LOGAN!!!!” was all I heard. Lex’s face focused and I saw his eyeliner was smeared to the point of no fixing it. “I called the cops finally. They arrested Ty.” I felt my mid-section lifted and held by Lex. “I won’t ever let anything happen to you again.” He said, like he would a lover.
I opened my mouth to reply. Air, that was all that you could hear. I began to cry more as I realized I couldn’t talk or sing anymore. This seemed to harm Lex as well. We both sat there crying. We didn’t care if I was still nude. It was just two 16 year old boys, crying for two purposes. One we were free from him and that’s what mattered, and two, we were now homeless and speechless.
My brother helped me to my room. My face still hurt from all the pain. My temple throbbed. I looked up at my brother and saw him holding out a pair of black and gray checkered boxers. I took them and stepped into them. Soon a black and white, horizontal striped shirt was on and a pair of black skinny jeans and converse.
There were police everywhere by eight that morning. Lex was explaining to them. I sat in my room against the wall in between the wings and halo I drew. My eyeliner was redone and smudged from all the moisture.
I felt a hand on my cheek. I looked up to see my guardian angel again. She fixed my hair, and smiled. She faded away.
Stuffing my clothes in a garbage bag, I grabbed my sketch book, drawing pencils, and coloring pencils and left. I never once looked back.
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I know. i want to make it better but withing two pages. but ill keep it for now. I might add Lex's story later.
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Extremely sad, and emotional, and raw. Makes me wanna cry, but at the same time, this is so beautifully written I wanna smile.
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I cry sometimes when I write things, or I smile or laugh and cry out with joy or I want to smash something. When you feel the emotions that readers and characters feel. You know you've gotten connected to the story.
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Lex Andrew Portz
I looked through a catalog of bass bodies. Wilma was nice, she would get me anything.
I highlighted a head and body I wanted. Soon I had strings as well.
“LEX!” Joey called up the stairs. Joey is Wilma’s husband. I walk out of my door and down the stairs. “WHAT!?” I yelled back playfully. He pointed to the door shaking his head, smiling.
I opened the door to see Angel standing there. I brought him into a hug and he hugged me back. “How’s it going sweetie?” I asked playfully. I never bothered to tell Angel that I had a major crush on him.
He smiled at my joke. “Nothing just wondering if you would like to go on a ‘date’ with me?” we both laughed. I grabbed my slouch beanie and put it on. We headed towards my car.
I jumped into the driver’s side and started up my Tahoe. As I was driving I couldn’t help but glance out of the corner of my eye at Angel. He was checking me out!
I pulled into the movie theater. “So, what are we seeing?” I asked.
“Let’s go see Red Dawn!” he replied unbuckling and getting out of the car. I followed suit. He had already paid for the tickets by the time I was in there. I paid for a large popcorn for us to share and a drink.
**********
Halfway through the movie, I could feel Angel’s hand brush mine. Instinct took over and I held it. We looked at each other. Letting go we watched the rest of the movie in silence.
Leaving the theater we got back in the car and drove to my house.
“Would you like to come in for a while, Angel?” I asked him. He walked in and ran up to my room. I smiled and followed behind. He plopped onto my bed, on which I jumped on top of him.
After a few minutes of rough housing, we were sitting on the bed panting.
“Look, Lex,” he started. I turned my head to the left and looked at him. “I know you might feel this way or not but I really like you. Not just in a friend way, but more.” I felt my heart leap at how smoothly he said this. He must have practiced.
“I love you too,” I replied. Next thing I knew our foreheads were pressed together. We both had the same idea for our lips pressed together. I closed my eyes, and let him take control.
His soft lips were all over mine. I soon felt his hands on my back pressing us closer together. Feeling like I should, I nibbled his bottom lip, asking for entrance. He gladly gave it to me. I started to search his mouth.
We parted for breath, but realized what we just did, and stopped.
“I better get going. Alice will be expecting me soon.” I nodded and watched him leave.
Laying on my bed I told myself that this was just the beginning of being bisexual.
‘I’ll lean more to the gay side though. Emo guys usually look better than girls.’
I looked through a catalog of bass bodies. Wilma was nice, she would get me anything.
I highlighted a head and body I wanted. Soon I had strings as well.
“LEX!” Joey called up the stairs. Joey is Wilma’s husband. I walk out of my door and down the stairs. “WHAT!?” I yelled back playfully. He pointed to the door shaking his head, smiling.
I opened the door to see Angel standing there. I brought him into a hug and he hugged me back. “How’s it going sweetie?” I asked playfully. I never bothered to tell Angel that I had a major crush on him.
He smiled at my joke. “Nothing just wondering if you would like to go on a ‘date’ with me?” we both laughed. I grabbed my slouch beanie and put it on. We headed towards my car.
I jumped into the driver’s side and started up my Tahoe. As I was driving I couldn’t help but glance out of the corner of my eye at Angel. He was checking me out!
I pulled into the movie theater. “So, what are we seeing?” I asked.
“Let’s go see Red Dawn!” he replied unbuckling and getting out of the car. I followed suit. He had already paid for the tickets by the time I was in there. I paid for a large popcorn for us to share and a drink.
**********
Halfway through the movie, I could feel Angel’s hand brush mine. Instinct took over and I held it. We looked at each other. Letting go we watched the rest of the movie in silence.
Leaving the theater we got back in the car and drove to my house.
“Would you like to come in for a while, Angel?” I asked him. He walked in and ran up to my room. I smiled and followed behind. He plopped onto my bed, on which I jumped on top of him.
After a few minutes of rough housing, we were sitting on the bed panting.
“Look, Lex,” he started. I turned my head to the left and looked at him. “I know you might feel this way or not but I really like you. Not just in a friend way, but more.” I felt my heart leap at how smoothly he said this. He must have practiced.
“I love you too,” I replied. Next thing I knew our foreheads were pressed together. We both had the same idea for our lips pressed together. I closed my eyes, and let him take control.
His soft lips were all over mine. I soon felt his hands on my back pressing us closer together. Feeling like I should, I nibbled his bottom lip, asking for entrance. He gladly gave it to me. I started to search his mouth.
We parted for breath, but realized what we just did, and stopped.
“I better get going. Alice will be expecting me soon.” I nodded and watched him leave.
Laying on my bed I told myself that this was just the beginning of being bisexual.
‘I’ll lean more to the gay side though. Emo guys usually look better than girls.’
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Please don't go further than anything like the end... In... Stuff I mean.
Aaannnnnnnnyyywaaayyy. It is common for one twin to be gay and the other not. There was some crazy scientific explanation but I forgot it.
Aaannnnnnnnyyywaaayyy. It is common for one twin to be gay and the other not. There was some crazy scientific explanation but I forgot it.
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Well written, glad my suggestion helped, and I agree with Holo. Gotta be careful with skimping those lines, or just not be quite so detailed but this was nothing bad. Just a little close to getting bad.
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'Cuz we have to keep it safe in case of kiddies... You should right stories, Heather. You'd probably make tons of money.
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