A place to put stories

[Me]

Long ago in times of old when people used stories to explain odd
happenings and the miracles in life the best place by the fire was
always kept for... The story teller Here you can post any story you want pretty much whether scary, or funny, anything under PG-13 pretty much I think >.<


Ok this story is called... "Dont open your eyes"

It was me and
my little sister and we went to the park. We saw a woman on the bench
reading we said hi but she didn't answer so we decided to play our
favorite game called dont open your eyes. This game the person who has
their eyes closed has to keep them closed and the other person has to
make the other persons eyes open. So my sister closed her eyes and I
tried to tickle her and she kept her eyes closed. So then I pretended to
walk away and she opened her eyes then it was my turn I closed my eyes.
Then my little sister screamed but I didn't fall for it then I heard
her say help me!! Help me and a scream then everything went silent I
opened my eyes and looked around and saw no one in the park. Then I saw
blood dripping from the top of me. When I looked up I saw my sister
hanging by a rope then I screamed in horror and called the police then I
looked around and saw that that womans book was still there I went and
grabbed it and then there was a note in red writing saying "Dont You
wish that You'd opened your eyes?"


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OK here's another one! I made this one up obviously
Hope you like it ^-^ I wrote it for literature one day and it got
second place!!! T^T It would have won first probably but I made a lot of
errors with grammar and spelling and stuff so... Anyway hope ya like it!

The Shape-Shifter
By ME

Chapter 1:Memories
I looked around everything was so white and sanitary in this 'hospital'
yeah right! I knew better this was a prison not a hospital. A prison
for all the rejected GMTS`s or Genetic Mutation Test Subjects. We all
had super powers or something like that. Mine was shape-shifting. Others
had flight, Gills. All types of crazy things!

World War 6 had
started all this. It had been going on since 2513! The U.S. and other
countries had been trying to sucessfully mutate humans since the
beginning of the war, to be slaves, to be living weapons. When people
started dissapearing around 2534 people started to worry about their
families and started rebbeling against the governments. A few people had
been hopeful back in 2576 that the war would end. No one even remebered
why it was started. They just kept fighting. Some people had resorted
to calling it The Never Ending War. Some people had a conspiracy theory
going that the war was started when France discovered a new planet that
could be colonized. But then China went on and claimed they discovered
it first but hadn't said so to keep it secret. So soon every nation on
planet Earth was claiming they had the right to colonize it because they
had found it and this theory about the war was believed by most people
until 2689. Then people started losing hope and nobody cared who had
found the planet first the just wanted to leave Earth and escape from
the war, to restart life.
I had been one of the first few succesful
GMTS`s. But I had tried to escape to many times. I hadn't cooperated
correctly according to them. They had made us 'enhanced beings' so that
we lived much much longer than the regular human would. About 100
something years was how long they expected most of us to live. I was
about 11 at the time I heard that. Now I was older though. I was 26.
Supposedly we aged slower to. No one had seen any humans for a while...
All of the scientists and other workers were robots for safety reasons
or something like that.None of us GMT's even knew if we were on Earth or
some other planet. No one knew the exact location. But wherever this
place was I would escape. Maybe tommorow maybe in a few years, I didn't
know when but I knew I would escape eventually. I just knew!

[Lunar]

THIS IS A TRUE STORY!
Here are the characters to give you some reference of who is who
me- Sam
My sister- Michelle
A friend- Gatlyn
A Friend- D'shon

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~One of those nights~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

It was about 11:30 at night. We had all packed together in my sisters white Ford Expedition. Michelle driving, D'shon as passenger seat, Gatlyn next to me in the back seat. The car is filled with different things from clothes and make up, to the two tree stumps in the back of the car that we were going to use for camping.
We were driving on the street next to my neighborhood and drove all the way to the end of the neighborhood where there is a back street that few cars drive on that eventually leads to a dirt road. Just before we got to the dirt road to take the back empty road to the store so we coud have sword fights in the toy isle as we planned, we saw a big white truck with pitch black tinted windows. The car was turned off with the lights off, then as soon as we passed it, the lights flashed on and the car started speeding toward us. As the stupid idiot I am, I yelled to D'shon, "GIVE ME THE BB-GUN AND I'LL SHOOT THEM!" Just the thought of shooting at a car like they do in the movies, made me shake with excitment! But I never was given the gun. D'shon just turned up the volume on the car sterio and got the song "Forever" by Drake to play. Of course, while getting chased by a stranger, D'shon had to rap, thinking he was the coolest guy on the planet.
Michelle stopped the car, turned off all the lights and slowly turned the car around as we saw the big truck stopped where the dirt road began. So they turned around and took off in the other direction and we chased after them. It was obvious that they were scared because of how fast they were driving to get away. So we chased them and somehow ended up in the desert, still chasing them. But after about 30 minutes, we gave up.
That was just another "One of those nights"

^.^

[Me]

(WOAH! I am just gonna put a random humming bird ^-^)

(And the shortest scary story ever X3)


The last man on earth sat in his house. There was a knock knock knock on the door...

(And a few videos ^-^)




The songs are much scarier than the story!!!!!! SO F-IN SCARYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[HiddenFaith]

Why does mother never smile?

Mother never smiles, I wonder why that is. I think I remember mother smiling, when daddy was around. She would laugh to, like christmas bells it sounded. Sweet and cheery. I loved the way it sounded light in the dark. Like mother was actually happy. But then mother stopped laughing, instead she cried. Long nights in my bed, farthest from her. And yet I was still up, hearing her dreadful tears in the middle of the night. The sobs that racked her body haunting my dreams. Turning them into dark nightmares. Then she stopped crying, daddy stopped coming around. Things got.... Dark. Mommy got real quiet, no more laughing, no more crying, no more crying. I asked her where daddy went once, she got mad. Yelling at me not to ask about him anymore. I cried that night. I havn't seen daddy for so long, and she got real angry at me. Threatening to leave me outside for a week if I mention him again. I knew she would follow through with it. I never said his name around her again. She was so... cold.... No more smiles. Why doesn't she smile? What happened? Was it daddy? Did daddy make her sad, like grandpa made grandma? I hope not, but she won't tell me why she doesn't smile anymore. I asked her about it, but she ignored me. Refusing to answer me for the longest of time. Untill now, I'm going to ask her one more time. I have to know the answer. Its been thirteen years sense I've seen her smile. I just wanna make her smile again. I used to do that all the time, telling her jokes, doing funny things. I never got smiles, or laughter, or even a hint of her having liked it. She was so cold....
I need to know why mommy doesn't smile.

[Gaara愛]

ok sorry i half to

GIRL WITH THE SCARF

there was this girl that always wore a scarf wether it was to bead or durring the hottest day of summer! one day she gets married and he asked her "Why do you always wear the scarf?" she said ill tell you later. then she sits there in her bed 50 years later and dieing. "I promised to show you why i always wore the scarf now i will show you" she pulls the scarf off and her head drops to the floor

[Me]

(hehe I know that story...)



just for haha's before the story...





Once there was this beautiful flower lady who died of an illness at this
very hospital(any 1 really). That night, a security guard was doing his
rounding on the second level. . on a distant, he heard a faint sound. .
.

psst. .

he could smell a faint aroma of the lavender. .
he remembered about the flower lady who had died on this level. The
ward was somewhere twards the end of the hall but he brush away the
thought of ghost and such. .he continued walking. .

psst!

the sound gotten stronger and the smell of the lavender grew heavier. .
feeling a bit scared, he decided to walk faster. .

psst!!!

this
time the hissing get more louder and the aroma get even more heavier.
The guard felt like he was getting near to something or even. .
somebody. . .he look ahead. . then he realize he was getting near the
ward where the flower lady died. . . he keep on walking

psST!

he sense something was wrong as he approached the ward. . he began praying as he walk trying to ignore the ghostly thought. .

and soon as he stand in front of the ward. .


PSST!!!

He heard that the sound was just above him and the smell was so strong. .

he look up. .

slowly. . .

slowly. . .








and. . .
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damn it! stupid air refresherner!

[Lunar]

-About A Pit Bull-
Humans got together and made two dogs breed and two months later my mama had me. I'm sorry you hate me... I was young and tiny and had a brain the size of a pea but that's larger than the love that you have shown me. I'm sorry you hate me... I grew up around hate and anger and violence and when I needed your help the most all you showed me was silence. I'm sorry you hate me... Men beat me and starved me and forced me to be mean, They cut me and yelled at me and did things that I wish I had never seen, I was young and tiny and beaten down and broken, I was tired and lonely and all I needed was a token...a token of affection or even the littlest piece of your compassion, But when it came right down to it you chose to do away with me like I had gone out of fashion I was rescued and taken to a place called a pound, I was handled and talked to and shown so much attention but because of my fearful and angry attitude I was deemed to be too dangerous. They put this thing over my mouth and drug me to a tiny little room where a man with a needle waited to grant me my doom. I was young and tiny and all alone and because of mean men I never got the chance to have a home To experience love and happiness and be free of blame...I never even had a name I was born and tortured and harassed by so much undeserved fear and mockery I am an American Pit Bull Terrier and I am so sorry you hate me...

[Me]

That's so sad! But... I'm sorry to say that pitbull's aren't the only ones who are mistreated like that! A lot of dogs have been! There was even this guy here in Harrisburg just outside of town he owned some property that had like, five barns on it. And so on the news it said that the man who owned the property had been keeeping a bunch of dogs that strayed onto his property and that he got from the pound and he was having dog fights and stuff! And they said that there were like, over 50 different breeds of dog there in those barns NOT including the mised breeds!

[Lunar]

I know there are several other breeds that are terribly mistreated, but right now the Pit Bull breed is the most hated by the government and many companies in the USA because of their bad reputation.
Other Breeds:
Rottweiler
Doberman
German Shepherd
Causation Ovcharka
Mastiff
Alaskan/Siberian Husky
Chow-chow
Old English Sheepdogs
Giant Schnauzers
Jack Russell Terriers
Miniature Pinschers

and more

[Me]

I know... I'm just glad they don't have shark fights! or dolphin fights or anything! that would be frikin scary!

[SIN]

Seriously? Stories with lack of vocabulary befitting one of your kind in a country that widely speaks English, and I, an Asian (mind you, we've been thrashed by you guys over and over. Except for that one time in 'Nam.), wield better hold over the vocabulary than you do.

You wanna write stories, draw attention from the reader. Use big words. Spark the imagination, as if they were they, feeling the hot, sweaty air of a pitbull fight, or the crisp, salty breeze of the sea, whipping past your face and your hair.

Please. This is so pitiful. I expected more. The voices in my head are screaming at your typos too. Please correct your spelling and grammar.

Pardon, but I'm a critic. Critics do what critics do best. Criticize. Have a good day. I'm trying so, so hard to not go Grammar Nazi on all of you. Trust me when I say this. The voices in my head aren't helping.

[Lunar]

"Seriosuly?" I didn't even write that >.< I got it from someone on a game I play so tough luck. You'll live with a few misspelled words and some bad grammar. If you don't like it, then don't read it.
itz n0t da enD of da w0rld lolz
And Wooh Freakin Hoooh there isn't big words in there and that is because not everyone knows as many words or has as big as a vocabulary as you do.

[Me]

(In reply to SIN)


I talk funneh because I want to I could totally be talkin' all proper like and not be screwin' up on purpose but It's such a pain because I type so fast that my fingers trip over each other and make lotsa mistakes sometimes.


And Lunar... DUN BE SO MEAN! *scolds her*

[Lunar]

>.< sorry. I'm not a nice person. Especially when I'm PO'd >:[ It's stupid to criticize such a small thing when the story had a much bigger meaning behind it than how words were spelled and punctuation was

[Me]

I was kinda kiddin... But, you have a good point I guess.

[SIN]

The feelings and thoughts aren't gonna seep out by themselves. It's like a regular spam you see in a random vid on youtube.

DURRHURR DON'T READD THIS MESSAGE OR SOMETHING TERRIBLE WILL HAPPEN. REPOST THIS IN FIVE OTHER THREADS, AND YOUR DREAM WILL COME TRUE. IF YOU DONT, A GIRL WILL COME OUT OF YOUR CLOSET AND KEEL YOU. DURR HURR. A YOUNG BOY DID NOT FOLLOW THE INSTRUCTIONS AND NEXT DAY, HE FOUND DEAD ON FLOOR, BLEEDING FROM HIS EYES AND MPUTH. DURR HURR. REPOST THIS ON FIVE THREADS NOW!

And etcetera, etcetera. And you know what? I'll break your head in if you say the construction and the feeling of stories are 'such a small thing'. Seriously? You don't appreciate the art of words, more likely.

[Me]

woah >_< NOW THAT'S SPAM! That in the middle there...


"DURRHURR DON'T READD THIS MESSAGE OR SOMETHING TERRIBLE WILL HAPPEN.
REPOST THIS IN FIVE OTHER THREADS, AND YOUR DREAM WILL COME TRUE. IF YOU
DONT, A GIRL WILL COME OUT OF YOUR CLOSET AND KEEL YOU. DURR HURR. A
YOUNG BOY DID NOT FOLLOW THE INSTRUCTIONS AND NEXT DAY, HE FOUND DEAD ON
FLOOR, BLEEDING FROM HIS EYES AND MPUTH. DURR HURR. REPOST THIS ON FIVE
THREADS NOW!"

[Lunar]

Really SIN?
your going to threaten me? you dont know who i am or what i could be capable of so you should seriously watch what you say to people!

[Me]

... Please stop arguing. I hate to see people fight, even if it is extreme strangers I don't know exchanging mean words, I still don't like fights.

[SIN]

Heh. Alright. I'd like to see a kid like you do something to the ex-2nd lieutenant of one of the existing and still strong gangs down here. They have a thing with people messing with their ex-members.

Holo, don't worry. It's just what we trolls do. Mess with people. But of course. I have back up. I'm not even worked up! So basically, it's like that scene where the villain (yours truly) is sipping tea in her garden and the 'hero' (our dear Lunar) is swinging her sword at me furiously, without even touching me. It's a pretty cool scene to imagine actually. I LOVE IT! Paul, get the director on the phone! I have a great suggestion!

Jokes aside. Of course, Holo. But the fighting one must first find peace, before the fighting stops. And, at the risk of repeating myself, I'm not the one getting angry here~

[Lunar]

I dont give a crap what you have to say about me SIN. Ooo your so scary! thats why you waited two days trying to think of something good to say, right? And how am i just some kid. again, you know nothing about me or where i come from. At least i have the decency to not go telling everyone about it because honestly, no one cares.

I'm done here. you go ahead and keep running your mouth, but im done. i have better things to do than argue with someone who thinks they're beter than everyone else. Get over yourself SIN.

[Me]

*uncovers my ears and glances at them both* You guys done now? Good, I can give the definition of an internet troll my friend Angel gave this definition to me. Get ready to go a little crazy from my friend!



In Internet slang, a troll is someone who posts inflammatory,^[2] extraneous,
or off-topic messages in an online community, such as an online
discussion forum, chat room, or blog, with the primary intent of
provoking readers into an emotional response^[3] or of otherwise disrupting normal on-topic discussion.^[4] The noun troll may refer to the provocative message itself, as in: "That was an excellent troll you posted". While the word troll and its associated verb trolling are associated with Internet discourse, media attention in recent years has made such labels subjective, with trolling describing intentionally provocative actions outside of an online context. For example, mass media uses troll to describe "a person who defaces Internet tribute sites with the aim of causing grief to families."





I'm starting to suspect that she just copied and pasted that off of wikipedia!

[SIN]

Either wiki or urbandictionary, I must say.

By the way, Lunar. Heard of irony? I'm practically laughing myself silly at the hypocritic statement you made.

[Lunar]

I'm not sure if this counts as a story, but it's a song my sister always sings when she goes hunting and I think it's funny lol ^.^

~~
I'm a little deer, short and stout.
Here are my antlers, here is my snout.
When a hunter shoots me, hear me SHOUT!
Hang me by the leg and gut me out:)
~~

Hahahaha this is the song I'll be teaching little kids ^.^ Not the teapot version of it.

[Me]

LOL! Me to Lunar!

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